Hi Brogan, while you have covered most aspects of the evaluation your response is quite pedestrian.
1. You need to be more self critical - reflecting on the outcome of your ads in comparison to real media. 2. You also need to give greater emphasis to audience feedback responding to both positive points and criticism. 3. You are not technical enough in your analysis of your response to Q1 and Q2. You need to address all technical areas as well as features of narrative and genre. 4. There should be clear references to your understanding of related theoretical aspects. 5. You need to ensure that your presentation is not presented as an essay but as a report incorporating screen grabs that have been annotated / compared etc.
See Serena's as reference.
Please also make sure that there are no gaps in your blog. This is paramount to you being awarded a good mark for your research and planning.
Hi Brogan, while you have covered most aspects of the evaluation your response is quite pedestrian.
ReplyDelete1. You need to be more self critical - reflecting on the outcome of your ads in comparison to real media.
2. You also need to give greater emphasis to audience feedback responding to both positive points and criticism.
3. You are not technical enough in your analysis of your response to Q1 and Q2. You need to address all technical areas as well as features of narrative and genre.
4. There should be clear references to your understanding of related theoretical aspects.
5. You need to ensure that your presentation is not presented as an essay but as a report incorporating screen grabs that have been annotated / compared etc.
See Serena's as reference.
Please also make sure that there are no gaps in your blog. This is paramount to you being awarded a good mark for your research and planning.
Your 1st draft shows that you have borrowed skills from coursework writing services. Anyways good attempt due.
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